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It never died, It never went away
You liar, you lie to yourself
Let go your pride, why do you need it?
How sad when your heart concedes your head.

How sad

What lies you tell yourself,
slaughter your dreams with common sense
And for what? For convention, for standards,
for the prison of boundaries man has made himself.

How sad

She loved you. She cried.
She loved you, but she died.
Who is left standing in her place?
Not even a shadow of what she was.

How sad.

The pain in your eyes;
you see the change too.
She's happier now...
happier without you.

How sad.
©2004-2009 ~wickedsick
:iconwickedsick:

Author's Comments

Its not exactly about my exboyfriend. I certainly drew the words from my emotions, however, the first and second verses are fabrications of my imagination...at least, I hope they are.

The second verse...well, I'm not explaining because a good poem does enough speaking for itself.

The last verse...I don' know what that look it is I see in his eyes...so again, just my imagination filling in the holes.

(I do not swear by this poem; these are not any solid beliefs...if you're reading this and you know me and the situation, please please PLEASE don't look at this as anything other than a piece of art.)

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what a beautiful piece. it has so much feeling gently placed into it.
sorri for all the trouble you have had in your past. i wish you better for many years to come <3

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"Meine Sprache ist die elektronische Musik. Eine Sprache, die von Menschen aller Nationen auf der ganzen Welt verstanden wird, sie berührt, bewegt und mitreißt."

~Paul van Dyk
:iconwickedsick:
Well thank-you very much!
I wrote that two years ago, so I've pretty much moved on from the event that inspired it.
:iconandiquar:
such emotion and passion. i will copy it and bring it to your. you should hear me read it. it's very empowering. i like it. and you said it was bad. well you lied. how sad. jk but yeah its great.

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